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Beautiful......

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"When was the last time her hands were empty?"

Gorgeous. I was on edge the whole time then this twist was calming. Made the reader ride a wave of emotion with Lacey. Thanks for this <3

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Usually apocalyptic stories end in dark despair. This one points to an alternative. I like it.

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I've never been a fan of stories that end in despair. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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This is such a great story. I would still like it to be a book, but it works well as is.

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You're not the first person to tell me this! I may return to the idea later. Thank you!

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This is incredible. It’s a breath of fresh air to have a redemptive ending to an apocalyptic-ish (I say while typing on my iPhone 😬) story.

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Dude, I empathize with Lacey so much, this could be autobiographical. 😂

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