7 Comments

I love it!! What a tense chapter!

My favorite image was Abigail stopping the Darkness after her eleventh hour change of heart. Well done!

Expand full comment

As always, you rock. This part was well-written, well-thought-out, and meaningful.

Having the beast consider self-sacrifice shows that he has regained his humanity and realizes the mistakes he made. Having him save Bea shows honor and courage.

Expand full comment

THIS. WAS. FABULOUS. You had me on edge and worried from start to finish. Masterful.

Expand full comment

I had such a hard time not stopping to read this while finishing housework! This is not what I expected - it’s so dark and so good, and I’m so relieved because for a minute there I didn’t think Emmerich was going to make it!

Expand full comment

Ohh, I love it! This was so exciting. I love Abigail's character and that she shares in the redemption too - and Arthur turning up...wonderful.

Expand full comment

Sweet chapter (at least at the end!)

Expand full comment

Love this chapter! What great pacing!

Expand full comment