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E.B. Howard's avatar

That ending was so tense!

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S. L. Linton's avatar

I'm gonna be honest: the ending was one of the things I was least sure about. But my critique group liked it, so I changed very little about it!

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The Casual Writer's avatar

I'm going to side eye all of my characters from now on. Well done! :D

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S. L. Linton's avatar

That was exactly the reaction I wanted!!

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Leanne Shawler's avatar

Ooh. Ok, I’m gonna be real careful about my antagonists in future!

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Caitriana NicNeacail's avatar

Brilliant!

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S. L. Linton's avatar

Thanks!

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