You did a great job with this story. You brought back the original intent of what fairy tales were. They were life lessons with a story attached. Your inclusion of religion made it seem more realistic to me.
Thank you! I do monthly stories, some of which overtly include religion, and I like to think all of them have a message. I intend to do another serial in the autumn, but it won't be a fairytale retelling.
You did a great job with this story. You brought back the original intent of what fairy tales were. They were life lessons with a story attached. Your inclusion of religion made it seem more realistic to me.
Do you plan on doing any more stories like this?
Thank you! I do monthly stories, some of which overtly include religion, and I like to think all of them have a message. I intend to do another serial in the autumn, but it won't be a fairytale retelling.
I have issues counting as well!