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Matthew P. Schmidt.'s avatar

This definitely reads like the opening of a novel.

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Matthew P. Schmidt.'s avatar

One I'd want to read, I add!

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Leanne Shawler's avatar

Oooh, he defends the realm not the tyrant! Love it!

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Natalie Phillips's avatar

Love this - more please.

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Caitriana NicNeacail's avatar

Would love to read more of this story!!

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E.B. Howard's avatar

I like it! It definitely reads like part of a larger story.

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Heather Dickinson's avatar

Excellent writing! It definitely feels like the beginning of a novel.

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