I loved the blend of apparitions and time travel! I also appreciate how the ending seems like a "happy ending," while also facing the jarring fact that the man who ruined your childhood got a second chance.
I saw how long the story was and almost decided not to read it, but then I started and couldn't stop. And am so glad I didn't. This was both hauntingly beautiful and beautifully haunting. It got me deep in the heart. A real ghost story.
This is amazing, and I love where you chose to end it. I think a lot of writers would have continued the story for a few more paragraphs, but leaving it where you did was perfect!
This type of comment is completely allowed! I'm glad you liked it so much.
Gripping! One of your best.
Oh, thank you! I was a little unsure about it.
Loved how you seamlessly blended the phenomena of "time slips" and "apparitions of the living." This was a great story! Ending had me choked up.
So glad you were able to follow the time slips!
I loved the blend of apparitions and time travel! I also appreciate how the ending seems like a "happy ending," while also facing the jarring fact that the man who ruined your childhood got a second chance.
Thanks! I really wanted to lean into the idea of cycles and ask the question if there really is such a thing as closure.
I saw this was going to be a half hour read … I dithered but I am so glad I read this! The pain of seeing her dad at the end though. 😭😭
Kept me gripped to the end!
You are a master! So well done!
Wow.. what a story! So powerful, and well told.
I saw how long the story was and almost decided not to read it, but then I started and couldn't stop. And am so glad I didn't. This was both hauntingly beautiful and beautifully haunting. It got me deep in the heart. A real ghost story.
Masterfully done.
Thank you so much. I'm glad you didn't let the length scare you off!
This is amazing, and I love where you chose to end it. I think a lot of writers would have continued the story for a few more paragraphs, but leaving it where you did was perfect!
I really appreciate that!
Just discovered this. Marvelous!